The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

This diagram illustrates the stages involved in obtaining sugar from sugarcane. Overall, there are seven stages involved in the sugar manufacturing process including the growth of a sugarcane plant that is followed by the harvestation of the plant which is then forwarded to a crushing machine where the juice is extracted. After that, the juice is purified which is further evaporated..............................

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The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.