The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth

🎨 Color Key for IELTS Essay Feedback

• 🔵 Task Achievement (TA): Checks whether the task given in the prompt is achieved or not.

• 🔴 Lexical Resource (LR): Checks word choice problems.

• 🟢 Grammatical Range and Accuracy (GRA): Identifies grammatical issues.

• 🟡 Coherence and Cohesion (CC): Focused on logical and cohesive flow in writing.

The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Overall Band Score Estimate: 6.5 - 7 ⭐️

🟡 Coherence and Cohesion: Band 7

• Logical Structure: The essay follows a basic structure with an introduction, overview, and two detailed paragraphs.

• Transition: The transitions between sentences and paragraphs are well woven together.

• Paragraphing: Paragraphing is present, and each paragraph correctly focuses on each process.

🔴 Lexical Resource: Band 7

• Varied Vocabulary: Vocabulary is bit limited and repetitive.

• Accurate Spelling & Word Formation: The essay contains numerous no spelling errors.

🟢 Grammatical Range and Accuracy: Band 6

• Mix of Complex & Simple Sentences: The essay primarily uses mix of simple sentences and complex sentences well.

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• Accuracy: There are some grammatical errors:

  • Article usage: missing or incorrect articles ("the silkworm").

  • Punctuation: Missing commas.

  • Pluralization: "stage" should be "stages"

🔵 Task Achievement: Band 6

• Complete Response: The essay addresses the question well. However, many times irrelevant information is given.

• Appropriate Word Count: ✅

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